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::I see nothing wrong with it. ☆<span style="font-family:Algerian">[[User:Solar Dragon|<span style="color:green">The</span>]] [[User talk:Solar Dragon|<span style="color:red">Solar</span>]] [[Special:Contributions/Solar Dragon|<span style="color:blue">Dragon</span>]]</span>☆ 19:59, 2 February 2013 (UTC) | ::I see nothing wrong with it. ☆<span style="font-family:Algerian">[[User:Solar Dragon|<span style="color:green">The</span>]] [[User talk:Solar Dragon|<span style="color:red">Solar</span>]] [[Special:Contributions/Solar Dragon|<span style="color:blue">Dragon</span>]]</span>☆ 19:59, 2 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::I really dislike that "<nowiki>[[Chespin|other]]</nowiki> <nowiki>[[Fennekin|two]]</nowiki>" style. It is far better to just list them rather than linking random bits of text until you've listed things in links. --[[User:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#A70000">'''Snorlax'''</span>]][[User talk:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#0000A7">'''Monster'''</span>]] 04:30, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | :::I really dislike that "<nowiki>[[Chespin|other]]</nowiki> <nowiki>[[Fennekin|two]]</nowiki>" style. It is far better to just list them rather than linking random bits of text until you've listed things in links. --[[User:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#A70000">'''Snorlax'''</span>]][[User talk:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#0000A7">'''Monster'''</span>]] 04:30, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
::::Would this be better then? "It was one of the first Generation VI Pokémon to be {{tt|revealed to the public, along with the legendary Pokémon, Xerneas and Yveltal, and the other two starters, Chespin and Fennekin, on January 8, 2013|another way might be "[...] revealed, along with: Xerneas, Yveltal, Chespin, and Fennekin. This was on January 8, 2013 [...]}} as part of a special <nowiki>[[Pokémon Direct]]</nowiki> broadcast." I know that the first suggestion in this message is a bit comma heavy and the tt suggestion splits the sentence into two, but they are the best suggestions I have at the moment. --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 06:04, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | |||