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 ** Questions: 1. What color is the [[Pokémon Center]] roof?<br>2. How many Pokémon appeared?
 ** Answers: 1. Orange<br>2. 5
-* During her battle with Drew, May used a {{t|Fire}}-and-{{t|Water}} tactic inspired by the same tactic used by [[Dome Ace Tucker]] in ''[[AG153|Tactics Theatrics!!]]''. The only difference is that she used {{m|Fire Spin}} and {{m|Bubble}} in place of {{m|Fire Blast}} and {{m|Water Pulse}}.
+* During her battle with Drew, May uses a {{t|Fire}}-and-{{t|Water}} tactic inspired by the same tactic used by [[Dome Ace Tucker]] in ''[[AG153|Tactics Theatrics!!]]''. The only difference is that she used {{m|Fire Spin}} and {{m|Bubble}} in place of {{m|Fire Blast}} and {{m|Water Pulse}}.
-* In two oddly violent lines from the dub, Harley threatens to "wring her tiny neck with that bandanna" after May uses her Fire-and-Water tactic and "pound that puny punk" after she defeats Drew.
+* In two oddly violent lines from the dub, Harley threatens to "wring her tiny neck with that bandanna" after May uses her Fire-and-Water tactic and "pound that puny punk" when she defeats Drew.
 * An extended version of ''[[Spurt!]]'' plays during Ash's battle with Aipom.
-* The [[Magikarp salesman]] is seen in the crowd that watches Ash catch Aipom.
+* The [[Magikarp salesman]] is part of the crowd that watches Ash catch Aipom.
-* The preview for the next episode is narrated by {{an|Brock}}.
+* {{an|Brock}} narrates the next episode preview.
-* This episode is similar to ''[[AG123|Rhapsody in Drew]]'': each was the third and final episode of the region's Grand Festival, May battled Drew in each, and each dealt with the sixth member of Ash's team (Snorunt evolving and Ash catching Aipom).
+* This episode is similar to ''[[AG123|Rhapsody in Drew]]'': each was the third and final episode of the region's Grand Festival, May battled Drew in both, and both dealt with the sixth member of Ash's team (Snorunt evolving and Ash catching Aipom).
 ===Errors===
-* None of the moves used during May and Drew's battle in the previous episode affected their scores at all. Absol had even landed a direct hit on Combusken with Iron Tail in that episode, but the first deduction of points occurred in this episode—and to Drew—when Combusken uses Sky Uppercut while surrounded by Bubble, a combination that failed.
+* None of the moves used in May and Drew's battle during the previous episode affected their scores at all. Absol had even landed a direct hit on Combusken with Iron Tail in that episode, but the first deduction of points occurred in this episode—and to Drew—when Combusken uses Sky Uppercut while surrounded by Bubble, a combination that failed.
 * After Squirtle appears above Flygon, [[Drew]]'s eyes are blue instead of green.
-* The last time that Combusken is hit by Razor Wind in the dub, Ash comments that May and Drew's scores are even when the scoreboard just showed that Drew is clearly in the lead.
+* The last time Razor Wind hits Combusken in the dub, Ash comments that the scores are even when the scoreboard just showed that Drew is clearly in the lead.
-** After Combusken is hit by Water Pulse, May's score bar is larger than before.
+* After Water Pulse hits Combusken, May's score bar is larger than before.
-* When {{TP|Dawn|Aipom|Ambipom}} hops in excitement before stealing Ash's hat, there's a line going through her right foot.
+* When {{TP|Dawn|Aipom|Ambipom}} hops in excitement before stealing Ash's hat, her right foot has a line through it.
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