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	Ahem, I noticed your edit to the [[Wani-Wani]] article and I noticed that the grammar was...less than satisfactory. I'm not trying to offend, but the line "it stands up well to the attacks of Wani-Wani and Typhlosion as he prepares to fight back the attack of the opponent an explosion in the background hangs the battle." is really hard to interpret. I'm trying my best to try and fix it, but please try harder to perfect your English next time. I'm sorry if this sounds insulting. [[User:Ataro\|Ataro]] 00:46, 7 March 2012 (UTC)		Ahem, I noticed your edit to the [[Wani-Wani]] article and I noticed that the grammar was...less than satisfactory. I'm not trying to offend, but the line "it stands up well to the attacks of Wani-Wani and Typhlosion as he prepares to fight back the attack of the opponent an explosion in the background hangs the battle." is really hard to interpret. I'm trying my best to try and fix it, but please try harder to perfect your English next time. I'm sorry if this sounds insulting. [[User:Ataro\|Ataro]] 00:46, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
			:Ok, i understand.--[[User:Hikaru Wazana\|Hikaru Wazana]] 01:00- 7 March 2012