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::::Would this be better then? "It was one of the first Generation VI Pokémon to be {{tt|revealed to the public, along with the legendary Pokémon, Xerneas and Yveltal, and the other two starters, Chespin and Fennekin, on January 8, 2013|another way might be "[...] revealed, along with: Xerneas, Yveltal, Chespin, and Fennekin. This was on January 8, 2013 [...]}} as part of a special <nowiki>[[Pokémon Direct]]</nowiki> broadcast." I know that the first suggestion in this message is a bit comma heavy and the tt suggestion splits the sentence into two, but they are the best suggestions I have at the moment. --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 06:04, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | ::::Would this be better then? "It was one of the first Generation VI Pokémon to be {{tt|revealed to the public, along with the legendary Pokémon, Xerneas and Yveltal, and the other two starters, Chespin and Fennekin, on January 8, 2013|another way might be "[...] revealed, along with: Xerneas, Yveltal, Chespin, and Fennekin. This was on January 8, 2013 [...]}} as part of a special <nowiki>[[Pokémon Direct]]</nowiki> broadcast." I know that the first suggestion in this message is a bit comma heavy and the tt suggestion splits the sentence into two, but they are the best suggestions I have at the moment. --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 06:04, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::::It can be made a lot simpler just by putting: "Along with {{p|Chespin}}, {{p|Fennekin}}, {{p|Xerneas}}, and {{p|Yveltal}}, it was the first [[Generation VI]] Pokémon to be revealed to the public, being revealed on January 8, 2013 as part of the {{DL|Nintendo Direct|Pokémon Direct}} broadcast." I don't think it even needs to be specified that the other two are starter Pokémon. --[[User:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#A70000">'''Snorlax'''</span>]][[User talk:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#0000A7">'''Monster'''</span>]] 06:48, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | :::::It can be made a lot simpler just by putting: "Along with {{p|Chespin}}, {{p|Fennekin}}, {{p|Xerneas}}, and {{p|Yveltal}}, it was the first [[Generation VI]] Pokémon to be revealed to the public, being revealed on January 8, 2013 as part of the {{DL|Nintendo Direct|Pokémon Direct}} broadcast." I don't think it even needs to be specified that the other two are starter Pokémon. --[[User:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#A70000">'''Snorlax'''</span>]][[User talk:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#0000A7">'''Monster'''</span>]] 06:48, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
::::::Doing a quick comparison, I believe that is is the most natural sentence with the same meaning as the original text. I think that it would work out nicely. --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 08:20, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | |||