Talk:Onix (Pokémon): Difference between revisions

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My computer seems to be messing up and posting the wrong images. I'm sorry. - [[User:050294|050294]] 19:57, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
My computer seems to be messing up and posting the wrong images. I'm sorry. - [[User:050294|050294]] 19:57, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
== Grammar ==
In the Special Abilities section, the sentence that starts "If Onix takes a hard enough blow and it's body falls apart," that should be "its," not "it's."  The Behavior section is a run-on sentence.  In the Habitat section, there seems to be a preposition missing, possibly "in."--[[User:Trebligoniqua|Trebligoniqua]] 12:27, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
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