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 Agatha appears in ''[[PM035|Panic on the Luxury Liner?!]]''. She has the ability to transform into a {{p|Golbat}}.
-She is first seen as a Golbat, spying on Red when he was getting on the Luxury Liner. After they boarded, Agatha transforms into a human and is very interested in {{TP|Red|Clefairy}}. She does everything to get Clefairy to obey her. While on the ship, she causes the captain to collapse and makes Clefairy the new captain. However, all of this turned out to be fake as Agatha was only interested in Clefairy because his blood looked tasty. After sucking away Clefairy's blood, Red finds out who she is as she transforms into a Golbat. However, the blood Agatha drained from Clefairy turned out to not taste good, and miniature versions of Clefairy escape Agatha's Golbat body. She was last seen in the water after the luxury liner got destroyed.
+She is first seen as a Golbat, spying on Red as he boarded the Luxury Liner. After they boarded, Agatha transformed into a human. She took an interest in {{TP|Red|Clefairy}}. She does everything to get Clefairy to obey her. While on the ship, she caused the captain to collapse and made Clefairy the new captain. However, all of this turned out to be fake as Agatha was only interested in Clefairy because his blood seemed tasty. After she sucked Clefairy's blood, Red found out who she was as she transformed into a Golbat. However, the blood Agatha drained from Clefairy turned out to taste bad, and miniature versions of Clefairy escaped Agatha's Golbat body. She was last seen in the water after the Luxury Liner got destroyed.
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 |epnum=PM035
 |epname=Panic on the Luxury Liner?!
-|desc=Agatha has the ability to transform into a {{p|Golbat}}. It first appeared when it was spying on Red and his Pokémon. It transformed into a human. Later, it was transformed back into a Golbat. It was last seen on a sunken cruise ship.
+|desc=Agatha has the ability to transform into a {{p|Golbat}} and back into a human at will. She first appeared in this form when she was spying on Red and his Pokémon. She was last seen in this form on a sunken cruise ship.
 None of Golbat's moves are known.}}
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 |epnum=PM035
 |epname=Panic on the Luxury Liner?!
-|desc={{p|Haunter}} and {{p|Gengar}} were first seen spying on Red. They are hidden after Agatha transforms from a Golbat to her human self. Both reappear after Agatha changed back into a Golbat.
+|desc={{p|Haunter}} and {{p|Gengar}} were first seen spying on Red. They were hidden after Agatha transformed from a Golbat to her human self. Both reappeared after Agatha changed back into a Golbat.
 None of Haunter's and Gengar's moves are known.}}