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You changed "After the battle, you ride the Wheel with the trainer." to "After the battle, the Wheel is rode with the trainer." | You changed "After the battle, you ride the Wheel with the trainer." to "After the battle, the Wheel is rode with the trainer." | ||
The wheel is rode? Grammatically, that introduces passive voice. I do understand though that 2nd person should be avoided in Bulbapedia... --[[User:Joeshie|<span style="font-weight: bold; color:#6B8E23; border: 1px dashed #DFFFA5;">+ Joeshie +</span>]] <small>''([[User talk:Joeshie|<span style="color:#99CC32">is Mæ!</span>]])''</small> 19:48, 17 October 2010 (UTC) | The wheel is rode? Grammatically, that introduces passive voice. I do understand though that 2nd person should be avoided in Bulbapedia... --[[User:Joeshie|<span style="font-weight: bold; color:#6B8E23; border: 1px dashed #DFFFA5;">+ Joeshie +</span>]] <small>''([[User talk:Joeshie|<span style="color:#99CC32">is Mæ!</span>]])''</small> 19:48, 17 October 2010 (UTC) | ||
:<small><small>(aaaah i hate passive voice whenever i used microsoft word i never seemed to be able to type the right words to get rid of it)</small></small> I was more focused on removing the "you". If you have a better wording, go ahead and use it.--[[User:Cold|Cold]] <small>([[User talk:Cold|talk]])</small> 19:54, 17 October 2010 (UTC) | |||