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:::::I've edited the Origin with the suggested additions. Feel free to fix any mistakes I've overlooked or whatnot. [[User:Tiddlywinks|Tiddlywinks]] ([[User talk:Tiddlywinks|talk]]) 01:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC) | :::::I've edited the Origin with the suggested additions. Feel free to fix any mistakes I've overlooked or whatnot. [[User:Tiddlywinks|Tiddlywinks]] ([[User talk:Tiddlywinks|talk]]) 01:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC) | ||
It looks good to me. [[User:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#9F00C5">Crystal</span>]] [[User talk:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Talian</span>]] 01:50, 18 April 2016 (UTC) | It looks good to me. [[User:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#9F00C5">Crystal</span>]] [[User talk:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Talian</span>]] 01:50, 18 April 2016 (UTC) | ||
:::Regarding Helreginn, she is a {{wp|Jötunn}}, also known as the "Frost Giants" in Norse Mythos. Regarding the changes and removals in Tiddlywinks' version of the page, I agree with a lot of them, but I do think it could be considered notable that Jörmungandr comes from {{wp|Niðafjöll}}, the "dark mountains", in Norse mythos, because that may have helped to establish Zygarde's Ground typing and may have been the basis for the [[Terminus Cave]] (especially considering its root of "terminal"). That said, perhaps the information should be included on the Terminus Cave page instead? | |||
:::Otherwise, the only criticism I have is that the sentences flow a little choppily, which is something that's easily fixed with some transition words. [[User:Pacack| <span style="background:#000000"><span style="color:#ffe700">'''Pa'''ᗧ•••</span><span style="color:#0000FF">ᗣ'''ck'''</span> </span>]] 04:00, 18 April 2016 (UTC) | |||
== Template:Pokémon Infobox and the Undiscovered egg group == | == Template:Pokémon Infobox and the Undiscovered egg group == | ||