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Should the of be still removed in this case? It sounds a little wrong without it... [[User:CuboneKing|<font color="Red">Cu</font>]][[User talk:CuboneKing|<font color="Tan">bo</font>]][[Special:Contributions/CuboneKing|<font color="Green color light">ne</font>]][[Cubone (Pokémon)|<font color="Black">King</font>]] 05:00, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
Should the of be still removed in this case? It sounds a little wrong without it... [[User:CuboneKing|<font color="Red">Cu</font>]][[User talk:CuboneKing|<font color="Tan">bo</font>]][[Special:Contributions/CuboneKing|<font color="Green color light">ne</font>]][[Cubone (Pokémon)|<font color="Black">King</font>]] 05:00, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
::How about: "The infected Pokémon can infect other Pokémon with the virus for a period of two days, however the Pokérus timer can be delayed by several methods including placing the infected Pokémon in a PC box."--[[User:Beligaronia|Beligaronia]] ([[User talk:Beligaronia|talk]]) 06:38, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
::How about: "The infected Pokémon can infect other Pokémon with the virus for a period of two days, however the Pokérus timer can be delayed by several methods including placing the infected Pokémon in a PC box."--[[User:Beligaronia|Beligaronia]] ([[User talk:Beligaronia|talk]]) 06:38, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
I see what you mean, CuboneKing. It does sound a bit clumsy either way. I'm in favour of the complete overhall suggested by Beligaronia. I'll go ahead with it --[[User:Burjojo|Burjojo]] 13:26, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
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