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 ==Plot==
-A new challenge and a new adventure begins our story as everyone begins making preparations for the upcoming [[Chrysanthemum Island|Chrysanthemum]] {{pkmn|Contest}}. Outside the [[Contest Hall]], the registered {{pkmn|Coordinator}}s are preparing their prized {{OBP|Pokémon|species}} while {{Ash}} tries to hone {{AP|Sceptile}}'s skills while they still seem to be short of perfect. Ash directs Sceptile to use a {{m|Bullet Seed}} attack but only manages to create a small plume of white smoke, leaving Sceptile with a surprised look on his face. Ash tries to cheer Sceptile up giving him inspirational words of courage. {{an|May}} notices [[Drew]] as he walks up to {{ashfr|our heroes}}.
+A new challenge and a new adventure begins our story as everyone makes preparations for the upcoming [[Chrysanthemum Island]] [[Pokémon Contest]]. Outside the [[Contest Hall]], the registered {{pkmn|Coordinator}}s are preparing their prized {{OBP|Pokémon|species}} while {{Ash}} tries to hone {{AP|Sceptile}}'s skills while they still seem to be short of perfect. Ash directs Sceptile to use a {{m|Bullet Seed}} attack but only manages to create a small plume of white smoke, leaving Sceptile with a surprised look on his face. Ash tries to cheer Sceptile up giving him inspirational words of courage. {{an|May}} notices [[Drew]] as he walks up to {{ashfr|our heroes}}.
 Meanwhile, {{TRT}} is by the beach with [[Jessie]] dressed in her usual Contest attire and also plans to use {{TP|James|Mime Jr.}} in the upcoming Contest. In the distance, May begins to work on {{TP|May|Munchlax}} and {{TP|May|Combusken}}'s skills. Munchlax quickly lunges towards Combusken with a {{m|Focus Punch}}, but misses and continues on to nearly hit a bystander and crash into the soft sand. As everyone tries to remove Munchlax from the sand, May goes to apologize for its actions. [[Brianna|The young girl]] then tries to hand May a solitary rose, Munchlax jumps forward and snatches it from her hand, devouring it in one bite. May and the girl, named Brianna, walk down a corridor to come across the pool area. Brianna quickly notices Drew and begins to blush as May tries to introduce the two. After a few quick words, the two shake hands and Drew wishes her luck in the Contest. When Drew is finally out of sight, Brianna displays her affection for Drew. After a few short seconds, her attitude turns from lovestruck meekness to fiery determination as she tells May that she wants Drew's respect and the quickest way she'll get it is by beating May in this Contest.
-The spotlight shines on [[Lilian Meridian|Lilian]] as she begins announcing the Contest. The [[Appeal|Appeals Round]] begins and the first contestant is Jessie with her magnificent Mime Jr. dressed in {{wp|Hawaii}}an attire. When Mime Jr. is released from its [[Poké Ball]], it rotates on its upper head while Jessie performs a small hula dance. The crowd roars for Jessie's performance. Our next contestant on the stage is May and her Munchlax. May quickly directs Munchlax to unleash its {{m|Solar Beam}}, filling the stadium with a magnificent blend of lights and colors. Munchlax's next move is {{m|Metronome}}, so it begins moving its hands in synchronization. However, the move backfires and Munchlax is put to sleep, having used the move {{m|Rest}}. After a few moments of hesitation, May throws a [[Pokéblock]] into the air. Munchlax instantly awakens and devours the Pokéblock in mid-air while rotating. On its descent, Munchlax comes down with a {{m|Focus Punch}}, gracefully landing on the stadium platform.
+The spotlight shines on [[Lilian Meridian|Lilian]] as she begins [[Contest announcer|announcing]] the Contest. The [[Appeal|Appeals Round]] begins and the first contestant is Jessie with her magnificent Mime Jr. dressed in {{wp|Hawaii}}an attire. When Mime Jr. is sent out from its [[Poké Ball]], it rotates on its upper head while Jessie performs a small hula dance. The crowd roars for Jessie's performance. Our next contestant on the stage is May and her Munchlax. May quickly directs Munchlax to unleash its {{m|Solar Beam}}, filling the stadium with a magnificent blend of lights and colors. Munchlax's next move is {{m|Metronome}}, so it begins moving its hands in synchronization. However, the move backfires and Munchlax is put to sleep, having used the move {{m|Rest}}. After a few moments of hesitation, May throws a [[Pokéblock]] into the air. Munchlax instantly awakens and devours the Pokéblock in mid-air while rotating. On its descent, Munchlax comes down with a {{m|Focus Punch}}, gracefully landing on the stadium platform.
-The third contestant is Brianna, with her {{p|Surskit}}. Surskit uses {{m|Ice Beam}} on the stage, turning it to ice that it can skate across. Surskit gracefully pirouettes like an ice skater and finishes the performance with a high-velocity spin. The crowd cheers for Surskit's performance as all three judges give approval of Brianna's performance.
+The third contestant is Brianna, with her {{p|Surskit}}. Surskit uses {{m|Ice Beam}} on the stage, turning it to ice that it can skate across. Surskit gracefully pirouettes like an ice skater and finishes the performance with a high-velocity spin. The crowd cheers for Surskit's performance as the [[Contest Judge]]s give approval of Brianna's performance.
 The other contestants include {{p|Hoothoot}}, {{p|Hypno}}, {{p|Blastoise}}, and {{p|Castform}}. With the first round of competition ending, the contestants patiently wait for the list of those who have advanced to the [[Contest Battle]]s. The results are revealed and among the contestants are May, Brianna, and Jessie. May and Brianna display their happiness for advancement. The match-ups are then announced, with May to face Jessie in the first round of the tournament.
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 May and Brianna continue winning in the battle round until they find themselves against one another in the finals. The crowd cheers as the final battle is started. May calls upon her Combusken while Brianna releases her {{p|Vibrava}}. As Combusken moves in for the attack, Vibrava uses its {{m|Screech}} attack, causing Combusken to cover its ears. As Vibrava continues with its Screech attack, Combusken launches a Fire spin for a direct hit. Vibrava retaliates with its {{m|Dragon Breath}} attack, nullifying the Fire Spin. Vibrava then uses its {{m|Sand Tomb}} attack to entrap Combusken's legs in a mound of sand. Combusken struggles, but is unable to remove itself from the tomb. Suddenly, Combusken's feathers begin to glow a faint blue. After a moment, Combusken bursts from the Sand Tomb using its new move, {{m|Mega Kick}}. Vibrava doesn't let up, unleashing another Dragon Breath attack and hitting Combusken for great damage, reducing May's points further.
-Combusken ascends into the air for a {{m|Sky Uppercut}}, but misses its target as Vibrava goes for another Sand Tomb attack. Combusken disperses the sand once more and descends down with a hard {{m|Mega Kick}} on Vibrava. The two Pokémon crash into the ground, and Vibrava is declared unable to battle. With this victory over Brianna, May and Combusken have won the Chrysanthemum Contest. Ash shows a bit of relief as May is presented with the [[Ribbon]] of the Chrysanthemum Contest. Lilian concludes the competition with her usual phrase, "See you next time." As the sun is setting, May and Brianna reflect upon their Contest performances. May's friends join them on the beach, including Drew, who causes Brianna to blush and hide behind May. Drew acknowledges both of their good efforts and wishes Brianna luck, but she suddenly faints. Drew reminds May that she only has two Ribbons left until the [[Grand Festival]]. As he walks off into the distance, May watches him and begins to blush.
+Combusken ascends into the air for a {{m|Sky Uppercut}}, but misses its target as Vibrava goes for another Sand Tomb attack. Combusken disperses the sand once more and descends down with a hard {{m|Mega Kick}} on Vibrava. The two Pokémon crash into the ground, and Vibrava is declared unable to battle. With this victory over Brianna, May and Combusken have won the Chrysanthemum Contest. Ash shows a bit of relief as {{pkmn|Activities Committee|Contest Director}} [[Raoul Contesta|Mr. Contesta]] presents May with the Chrysanthemum [[Ribbon]]. Lilian concludes the competition with her usual phrase, "See you next time." As the sun is setting, May and Brianna reflect upon their Contest performances. May's friends join them on the beach, including Drew, who causes Brianna to blush and hide behind May. Drew acknowledges both of their good efforts and wishes Brianna luck, but she suddenly faints. Drew reminds May that she only has two Ribbons left until the [[Grand Festival]]. As he walks off into the distance, May watches him and begins to blush.
 As night falls, Jessie and Mime Jr. sit by the shoreside. [[James]], {{MTR}}, and {{TP|Jessie|Wobbuffet}} worry about Jessie. The night concludes with Team Rocket left in despair and our heroine May in possession of one more Ribbon.