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 ==Trivia==
-* This marks the first time that a male {{p|Garchomp}} appears in the anime.
+* This is the first appearance of a male {{p|Garchomp}} in the anime.
-* This is the first time in the anime that multiple Mega Evolved Pokémon are featured simultaneously.
+* This is the first time multiple Mega Evolved Pokémon are featured simultaneously in the anime.
-* This is the first time {{m|Blast Burn}} has been used in the anime.
+* {{m|Blast Burn}} makes its anime debut.
-** As of this episode, all [[Move variations|variations]] of {{m|Hyper Beam}} have been featured in the anime.
+** With this, all [[Move variations|variations]] of {{m|Hyper Beam}} have been featured in the anime.
-* This is the first time that {{m|Toxic}} has been used by a Pokémon that was not a {{type|Poison}}.
+* This is the first time {{m|Toxic}} has been used by a non-{{type|Poison}} Pokémon.
-* Excluding [[Pikachu shorts]], this is the first episode in the dub that features a completely different [[narrator]]. While [[Rodger Parsons]] and [[Mike Pollock]] provided their voices for the anime, both of them were actually playing the same narrator.
+* Excluding [[Pikachu shorts]], this is the first dubbed anime feature not narrated by [[Rodger Parsons]] or [[Mike Pollock]].
-* The Trainer Mairin mentions is {{Ash}}, and she makes a reference to events in ''[[XY002|Lumiose City Pursuit]]''.
+* The Trainer Mairin mentions is {{Ash}}, and she references the events of ''[[XY002|Lumiose City Pursuit]]''.
 ===Errors===
-* [[Professor Sycamore]]'s female {{p|Garchomp}} has a cut on her fin, which only a male would have.
+* [[Professor Sycamore]]'s female {{p|Garchomp}} has a cut on her fin, a male-only trait.
 ===Dub edits===