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"As Pikachu uses Thunderbolt attack on Milotic, it '''makes contact with Milotic, making Ash wonders about it.''' " | "As Pikachu uses Thunderbolt attack on Milotic, it '''makes contact with Milotic, making Ash wonders about it.''' " | ||
Makes contact with Milotic, making Ash do what? This doesn't make sense to me, I could fix wonders to wonder but it still wouldn't make sense, since I don't remember Ash wondering about the Milotic. Also later in the same paragraph there is a redlink to nonexistance move, I believe the move we're talking about is something else. [[User:TheBlazikenMaster|TheBlazikenMaster]] 18:48, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | Makes contact with Milotic, making Ash do what? This doesn't make sense to me, I could fix wonders to wonder <s>but it still wouldn't make sense, since I don't remember Ash wondering about the Milotic.</s> Also later in the same paragraph there is a redlink to nonexistance move, I believe the move we're talking about is something else. [[User:TheBlazikenMaster|TheBlazikenMaster]] 18:48, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | ||
:If I remember correctly, Milotic uses {{m|Recover}} immediately after Thunderbolt, making it perfectly fine. Maybe here Ash "wonders" about it. [[User:Jmath|<span style="color: #000033">'''Jm'''</span>]][[User talk:Jmath|<span style="color: #000099">'''a'''</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Jmath|<span style="color: #000033">'''th'''</span>]] 18:52, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | :If I remember correctly, Milotic uses {{m|Recover}} immediately after Thunderbolt, making it perfectly fine. Maybe here Ash "wonders" about it. [[User:Jmath|<span style="color: #000033">'''Jm'''</span>]][[User talk:Jmath|<span style="color: #000099">'''a'''</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Jmath|<span style="color: #000033">'''th'''</span>]] 18:52, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | ||
::Ok, yeah, you're probably right. I will change it so it will make grammatical sense. | ::Ok, yeah, you're probably right. I will change it so it will make grammatical sense. | ||
:::Forget about what I just said, I didn't remember correctly. [[User:TheBlazikenMaster|TheBlazikenMaster]] 18:57, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | |||