Can someone review this sentence?
"As Pikachu uses Thunderbolt attack on Milotic, it makes contact with Milotic, making Ash wonders about it. "
Makes contact with Milotic, making Ash do what? This doesn't make sense to me, I could fix wonders to wonder but it still wouldn't make sense, since I don't remember Ash wondering about the Milotic. Also later in the same paragraph there is a redlink to nonexistance move, I believe the move we're talking about is something else. TheBlazikenMaster 18:48, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- If I remember correctly, Milotic uses Recover immediately after Thunderbolt, making it perfectly fine. Maybe here Ash "wonders" about it. Jmath 18:52, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, yeah, you're probably right. I will change it so it will make grammatical sense.
- Forget about what I just said, I didn't remember correctly. TheBlazikenMaster 18:57, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- But the redlink is still an issue, because I somehow doubt she made up a move for Milotic to use. (As far as I know, only the TCG makes up moves.) TheBlazikenMaster 19:25, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- It's probably Milotic pushed Pikachu aside. I don't know who could make Aside. Jmath 19:34, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I don't know whether or not it's a real move, if it is I'm very surprised the page hasn't been made already. Give me some information about it, and I might consider starting the page. TheBlazikenMaster 19:36, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- There is no move like that. Jmath 19:38, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- That's exactly what I suspected. I will delink the word in a few minutes if nobody objects. TheBlazikenMaster 19:42, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- There is no move like that. Jmath 19:38, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I don't know whether or not it's a real move, if it is I'm very surprised the page hasn't been made already. Give me some information about it, and I might consider starting the page. TheBlazikenMaster 19:36, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- It's probably Milotic pushed Pikachu aside. I don't know who could make Aside. Jmath 19:34, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- But the redlink is still an issue, because I somehow doubt she made up a move for Milotic to use. (As far as I know, only the TCG makes up moves.) TheBlazikenMaster 19:25, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Forget about what I just said, I didn't remember correctly. TheBlazikenMaster 18:57, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, yeah, you're probably right. I will change it so it will make grammatical sense.
Cleanup
I have cleaned up the synopsis but I need approval from a higher rank to delete the cleanup sign. If anyone could help me with that, thanks. Chrispizza 21:18, 12 July 2011 (UTC)