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No offence, but can you try to use better grammar? Instead of "I became the player of Pokémon games as an accident, I '''buy''' the Yellow and the yellow color Game Boy Color in a game shop about 10 years ago", it would be "I became the player of Pokémon games as an accident, I '''bought''' the Yellow and the yellow color'''ed''' Game Boy Color in a game shop about 10 years ago." [[User:Chocolate|<font color="6D351A">Chocolate</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Chocolate|<font color="6D351A">Chat with Me</font>]])</small> 02:41, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | No offence, but can you try to use better grammar? Instead of "I became the player of Pokémon games as an accident, I '''buy''' the Yellow and the yellow color Game Boy Color in a game shop about 10 years ago", it would be "I became the player of Pokémon games as an accident, I '''bought''' the Yellow and the yellow color'''ed''' Game Boy Color in a game shop about 10 years ago." [[User:Chocolate|<font color="6D351A">Chocolate</font>]] <small>([[User talk:Chocolate|<font color="6D351A">Chat with Me</font>]])</small> 02:41, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | ||
Sorry....by grammer is not that's good.....but at least....thanks for pointing the grammer mistake.....--[[User:chungkingpun|chungkingpun]] 02:44, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||