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Please try to avoid repeating info multiple times in the same sentence or paragraph. For example, a lot of the info you add to character sections boils down to "X likes doing Y, as seen in this episode where X was shown doing Y." I can understand occasionally citing episodes where a particular trait really comes into play, but I think it's unnecessary to do this for every situation. [[User:PokemonMasterJamal3|PokemonMasterJamal3]] ([[User talk:PokemonMasterJamal3|talk]]) 21:49, 9 November 2023 (UTC) | Please try to avoid repeating info multiple times in the same sentence or paragraph. For example, a lot of the info you add to character sections boils down to "X likes doing Y, as seen in this episode where X was shown doing Y." I can understand occasionally citing episodes where a particular trait really comes into play, but I think it's unnecessary to do this for every situation. [[User:PokemonMasterJamal3|PokemonMasterJamal3]] ([[User talk:PokemonMasterJamal3|talk]]) 21:49, 9 November 2023 (UTC) | ||
:Again, please try to work on avoiding repetitive writing. Looking at both [https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Liko%27s_Hatenna#Personality_and_characteristics the first and second paragraphs in this section], it can be seen that "as seen/shown in Episode X" was used in three sentences in a row for ''both'' of them. [[User:PokemonMasterJamal3|PokemonMasterJamal3]] ([[User talk:PokemonMasterJamal3|talk]]) 19:22, 25 November 2023 (UTC) | :Again, please try to work on avoiding repetitive writing. Looking at both [https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Liko%27s_Hatenna#Personality_and_characteristics the first and second paragraphs in this section], it can be seen that "as seen/shown in Episode X" was used in three sentences in a row for ''both'' of them. [[User:PokemonMasterJamal3|PokemonMasterJamal3]] ([[User talk:PokemonMasterJamal3|talk]]) 19:22, 25 November 2023 (UTC) | ||
== Episodic events == | |||
I mentioned this before in my "Character sections again" talk page post, but you tend to overuse the terms "as seen in X episode" and "as shown in Y episode". I feel like adding events to character sections after every new episode can be very messy to read and ruins the flow a bit. | |||
I think these sections should focus more on consistently seen character traits that don't need specific episode citations. [[User:PokemonMasterJamal3|PokemonMasterJamal3]] ([[User talk:PokemonMasterJamal3|talk]]) 14:04, 13 January 2024 (UTC) | |||