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I went through and proofread | I went through and proofread It's a Hard Life for you, and I wanted to give you a couple pointers. I don't mean this is a rude way; I'm just trying to help you in the future. First of all, you might want to run your writing through a spell check program. There were quite a few typos, such as nammed instead of named and relucantly instead of reluctantly. It wouldn't hurt to make the page in your userspace first (at User:Hyliad/It's a Hard Life), and then let other people help edit it before it's mainspaced to cut down on grammar mistakes. Also, the plural of Pokémon is Pokémon, not Pokémons. And Poké Ball is two words, not one. Also, I would ''highly'' advise you to look at the [[BP:LLT|list of link templates]]. For example, instead of typing <nowiki>[[Nidorina (Pokémon)|Nidorina]], you shoud be typing {{p|Nidorina}}, and instead of [[Water Gun (move)|Water Gun]], you should put {{m|Water Gun}}</nowiki>. | ||
Also, to be perfectly honest, I really think you should just cut down the content on the page. If you look at [[Pokémon-X (webcomic)]] and [[Super Effective (webcomic)]], they are much more concise. You might want to use them as examples of what to change. Notice how short their plot is, whereas the article for It's a Hard Life goes into detail for every chapter? I would have done it myself, but you seem to have read the comic and so I think you could summarize it better. | Also, to be perfectly honest, I really think you should just cut down the content on the page. If you look at [[Pokémon-X (webcomic)]] and [[Super Effective (webcomic)]], they are much more concise. You might want to use them as examples of what to change. Notice how short their plot is, whereas the article for It's a Hard Life goes into detail for every chapter? I would have done it myself, but you seem to have read the comic and so I think you could summarize it better. | ||