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 == Generation VI motif ==
-:"Poorly written"? "Badly formatted"? "No need for expansion"? That's harsh.
+:"Poorly written"? "Badly formatted"? "No need for expansion"? That's harsh. And this section could use some expanding.
 :''(Just so you're aware, I'm not trying to rag on you. I just trying to express how incomplete the section was.)''
-: If my editing for the Generation VI motif section was that bad, then Generation VII motif section must be a complete dumpster fire. If you didn't like the writing or formatting, you can just edit it to be more satisfactory. I'm just presenting information from the games in a cohesive package; '''''discussion is sparked by the presentation of evidence'''''. The original writing just didn't feel ''sufficent'' enough in information to sate the need for a detailed look into the generation's thematic core. There is ''way more'' to this generation than just beauty, balance, and harmony; what about the themes presented by Mega Evolution, Lysandre's motives, or '''even how Zygarde fits into this generation's theme (He WAS introduced in this generation, for crying out loud!)'''. [[User:Argentarus|Argentarus]] ([[User talk:Argentarus|talk]]) 16:47, 18 April 2019 (UTC)
+: If you didn't like the writing or formatting, you can just edit it to be more satisfactory. I'm just try to present information from the games in a cohesive package; '''''discussion is sparked by the presentation of evidence'''''. The original writing just didn't feel ''sufficent'' enough in information to sate the need for a detailed look into the generation's thematic core. There is ''way more'' to this generation than just beauty, balance, and harmony; what about the themes presented by Mega Evolution, Lysandre's motives, or '''even how Zygarde fits into this generation's theme (He WAS introduced in this generation, for crying out loud!)'''. The section needed expanding. [[User:Argentarus|Argentarus]] ([[User talk:Argentarus|talk]]) 16:47, 18 April 2019 (UTC)