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-==Lake Valor (First visit)==
+==Lake Valor (first visit)==
 [[File:Lake Valor Dry Pt.png|thumb|250px|Lake Valor (Dried up)]]
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-Turns out [[Team Galactic]] is responsible for the tremors due to using a large bomb to dry out the lake to find the cavern where {{p|Azelf}} sleeps. You won't be able to find any wild Pokémon while the lake is in this condition. Time to face some Galactic Grunts.
+Turns out [[Team Galactic]] is responsible for the tremors due to using a large bomb to dry out [[Lake Valor]] to find the cavern where {{p|Azelf}} sleeps. You won't be able to find any wild Pokémon while the lake is in this condition. Time to face some Galactic Grunts.
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-Once you get past them and enter the Valor Cavern, you'll find it is too late, Azelf has been taken by Team Galactic and instead you will have to face the leader of this unit, Commander Saturn.
+Once you get past them and enter the [[Valor Cavern]], you'll find it is too late. Azelf has been taken by Team Galactic. Instead you will have to face the leader of this unit, Commander Saturn.
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-Saturn's Golbat can easily be knocked out with an {{t|Electric}} or {{type|Rock}} move. His Bronzor should be no problem with a Fire-type special move just like in the Canalave Gym. His star Pokémon is a {{p|Toxicroak}}. It takes a 4× weakness to a {{type|Psychic}}. If you do use a Psychic-type make sure it is gifted in speed along with having a good move like {{p|Espeon}} or {{p|Alakazam}} since a slower Psychic-type like {{p|Gardevoir}} can't handle Toxicroak's {{m|Faint Attack}}, a {{type|Dark}} move. A {{type|Flying}} type can also handle Toxicroak.
+Saturn's Golbat can easily be knocked out with an {{t|Electric}} or {{type|Rock}} move. His Bronzor should be no problem with a Fire-type special move just like in the Canalave Gym. His star Pokémon is a {{p|Toxicroak}}. It takes a 4× weakness to a {{type|Psychic}}. If you do use a Psychic-type make sure it is gifted in {{stat|Speed}}, like {{p|Espeon}} or {{p|Kadabra}}, since a slower Psychic-type may have trouble with Toxicroak's {{m|Faint Attack}}, a {{type|Dark}} move. Toxicroak is also weak to {{t|Ground}} and {{t|Flying}}.
 After the battle Saturn will gloat how pointless it is to stand up to Team Galactic and mentions that Commander Mars should have caught the guardian at Lake Verity by now before leaving. It is time to head to Lake Verity, so make sure to have your team ready before flying back to [[Twinleaf Town]] and then heading to Lake Verity.
-==Lake Verity (Second Visit)==
+==Lake Verity (second visit)==
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-When you arrive you'll find Rowan holding off one of the grunts while Lucas/Dawn is up ahead facing Mars and needs your help. After going through two [[Double Battle]]s you will face off against Mars who wishes to get back at you for screwing up her previous mission at the [[Valley Windworks]].
+When you arrive at [[Lake Verity]], you'll find Rowan holding off one of the grunts while Lucas/Dawn is up ahead facing Mars and needs your help. After going through two [[Double Battle]]s you will face off against Mars who wishes to get back at you for screwing up her previous mission at the [[Valley Windworks]].
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 ==Route 211==
 [[File:Sinnoh Route 211 Pt.png|thumb|350px|Route 211]]
-There is nothing of value here now, except going into Mt. Coronet's north area. However, you can visit this place earlier in the game if you wish when you first get to Eterna City for the West side of this route or Celestic Town for the East side and find basic stuff here.
+There is not much of value on {{rt|211|Sinnoh}} now, except entrance to Mt. Coronet's north area. However if you wish, you can visit the west side of this route earlier in the game when you first get to Eterna City. Travel through Celestic Town if you want to go to the east side.
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