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==Plot==
==Plot==
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{{Ash}} and {{ashcl}} along with their Pokémon are camping in the forest. Ash and {{an|Kiawe}} are helping to set up a tent whilst {{an|Sophocles}} reads them the instructions as {{an|Mallow}} and {{TP|Mallow|Steenee}} are preparing food whilst {{an|Lillie}} is trying to set a campfire to cook the food. {{AP|Litten}} comes over to her which gives Lillie an idea and asks Litten to light the fire and Litten complies, using {{m|Ember}} but as Lillie thanks Litten for the help, [[Snowy]] ends up {{status|freezing}} the fire with {{m|Powder Snow}}. Ash calls out, pleased that they have got the tent set up as {{Rotom}}, {{AP|Pikachu}}, {{AP|Rockruff}} and {{TP|Sophocles|Togedemaru}} go inside to check it out and give their approval off the tent. Mallow informs the boys that the curry is almost ready which excites Ash and Sophocles as {{an|Lana}}, illuminating her face with a flashlight asks them if they know that this forest comes with a scary history which scares the others and tells them that people enter the forest tend to fall asleep for no good reason without any idea that it is happening and that when they awake before giving a scream, Lana tells them they are just skin and bones like they haven't eaten in ages which worries Sophocles as Kiawe thinks that it is just a rumor as Mallow says that is is just one of Lana's jokes but a rustling sound ends up scaring Mallow and Lillie only for Rockruff to come out of the bushes. Ash tells Rockruff not to scare them like that and the others laugh, unaware that across the river, a {{p|Morelull}} is watching them. Soon the curry is ready and everyone is eating their meal as Lillie notes that it is quite spicy which makes it good. This pleases Mallow as Sophocles and Ash say they'll be having seconds which Lillie says they can as they made a lot. Kiawe notices they is still a lot left and asks why they made so much as Lillie explains she didn't know that rice expands when it cooks as Mallow says they made the curry based on the rice. Lillie apologizes and says that she read a lot about camping before she came but didn't read anything about cooking. Ash is surprised that Lillie hasn't been camping before as Mallow points out all of Lillie's luggage which isn't exactly camping gear which leads Lillie to think she bought too much as Lana asks what she brought which Lillie replies was a change of clothes, towel and pajamas, [[Max Repel]] and [[potion]] along with plenty of back ups for each and explains that she has never slept in a tent or sleeping bag before and is a bit nervous as Lana says that when out camping, they can stay out as long as they want as the others describe the sort of activities such as hanging around the campfire, roasting marshmallows as Mallow notes it gets dark at night and asks Sophocles if he'll be alright but Sophocles has brought what he needs to help and brings out a {{p|Lampent}} shaped lamp and calls out {{TP|Sophocles|Charjabug}} and attaches the cords to Charjabug who generates the electricity needed to power the lamp as Lana notes that a flashlight would do the same thing but Sophocles says it wouldn't even be close as Togedemaru gives Charjabug a pat.
{{Ash}} and {{ashcl}} along with their Pokémon are camping in the forest. Ash and {{an|Kiawe}} are helping to set up a tent whilst {{an|Sophocles}} reads them the instructions as {{an|Mallow}} and {{TP|Mallow|Steenee}} are preparing food whilst {{an|Lillie}} is trying to set a campfire to cook the food. {{AP|Litten}} comes over to her which gives Lillie an idea and asks Litten to light the fire and Litten complies, using {{m|Ember}} but as Lillie thanks Litten for the help, [[Snowy]] ends up {{status|freezing}} the fire with {{m|Powder Snow}}. Ash calls out, pleased that they have got the tent set up as {{Rotom}}, {{AP|Pikachu}}, {{AP|Rockruff}} and {{TP|Sophocles|Togedemaru}} go inside to check it out and give their approval off the tent. Mallow informs the boys that the curry is almost ready which excites Ash and Sophocles as {{an|Lana}}, illuminating her face with a flashlight asks them if they know that this forest comes with a scary history which scares the others and tells them that people enter the forest tend to fall asleep for no good reason without any idea that it is happening and that when they awake before giving a scream, Lana tells them they are just skin and bones like they haven't eaten in ages which worries Sophocles as Kiawe thinks that it is just a rumor as Mallow says that is is just one of Lana's jokes but a rustling sound ends up scaring Mallow and Lillie only for Rockruff to come out of the bushes. Ash tells Rockruff not to scare them like that and the others laugh, unaware that across the river, a {{p|Morelull}} is watching them. Soon the curry is ready and everyone is eating their meal as Lillie notes that it is quite spicy which makes it good. This pleases Mallow as Sophocles and Ash say they'll be having seconds which Lillie says they can as they made a lot. Kiawe notices they is still a lot left and asks why they made so much as Lillie explains she didn't know that rice expands when it cooks as Mallow says they made the curry based on the rice. Lillie apologizes and says that she read a lot about camping before she came but didn't read anything about cooking. Ash is surprised that Lillie hasn't been camping before as Mallow points out all of Lillie's luggage which isn't exactly camping gear which leads Lillie to think she bought too much as Lana asks what she brought which Lillie replies was a change of clothes, towel and pajamas, [[Max Repel]] and [[potion]] along with plenty of back ups for each and explains that she has never slept in a tent or sleeping bag before and is a bit nervous as Lana says that when out camping, they can stay out as long as they want as the others describe the sort of activities such as hanging around the campfire, roasting marshmallows as Mallow notes it gets dark at night and asks Sophocles if he'll be alright but Sophocles has brought what he needs to help and brings out a {{p|Lampent}} shaped lamp and calls out {{TP|Sophocles|Charjabug}} and attaches the cords to Charjabug who generates the electricity needed to power the lamp as Lana notes that a flashlight would do the same thing but Sophocles says it wouldn't even be close as Togedemaru gives Charjabug a pat.


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