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:::The next few sentences just don't seem to make much sense. The sentences go on about how the archipelago regions branch off of "these regions," but the reader doesn't know what "these regions" are because of their removal from the section. If the reader gets the names of "these regions," he/she will be more clear on the topic. It doesn't seem like I'll win this argument; it's two against one at this point. --[[User:RedHailfire|RedHailfire]] ([[User talk:RedHailfire|talk]]) 01:18, 3 March 2017 (UTC) | :::The next few sentences just don't seem to make much sense. The sentences go on about how the archipelago regions branch off of "these regions," but the reader doesn't know what "these regions" are because of their removal from the section. If the reader gets the names of "these regions," he/she will be more clear on the topic. It doesn't seem like I'll win this argument; it's two against one at this point. --[[User:RedHailfire|RedHailfire]] ([[User talk:RedHailfire|talk]]) 01:18, 3 March 2017 (UTC) | ||
::::If we were to list Alola with Hoenn that has little to no relevence to the Orange Archipelago and Decolore Islands if that's what you mean. So again I see no point in listing them and if you have a problem with the wording then change it.--[[User:Raltseye|<span style="color:#FF6464">R</span><span style="color:#11BB11">alts</span><span style="color:#6464FF">eye</span>]] [[User talk:Raltseye|prata med mej]] 01:22, 3 March 2017 (UTC) | ::::If we were to list Alola with Hoenn that has little to no relevence to the Orange Archipelago and Decolore Islands if that's what you mean. So again I see no point in listing them and if you have a problem with the wording then change it.--[[User:Raltseye|<span style="color:#FF6464">R</span><span style="color:#11BB11">alts</span><span style="color:#6464FF">eye</span>]] [[User talk:Raltseye|prata med mej]] 01:22, 3 March 2017 (UTC) | ||
:::::"These regions" refers back to "several [[region]]s" in the first sentence. Like I think Raltseye already said, if people want names then, they can check the link. [[User:Tiddlywinks|Tiddlywinks]] ([[User talk:Tiddlywinks|talk]]) 01:25, 3 March 2017 (UTC) | |||