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[[User:Stang|Stang]] ([[User talk:Stang|talk]]) 04:33, 30 January 2013 (UTC) | [[User:Stang|Stang]] ([[User talk:Stang|talk]]) 04:33, 30 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
== Choppiness of paragraph regarding its status as "first-introduced" of the generation == | |||
Am I the only one who finds that beginning a sentence... no, an entire paragraph, with "It- alongside ... blah blah blah- was the first... " gives the paragraph an excessively choppy flow? | |||
Every time I encounter this sentence in the pages for all 3 Gen 6 Starters, I have to re-read it to understand what it's saying. | |||
I'm a native English speaker/reader, so I think there is a legitimate issue here. I propose just saying "It was one of the first... ", because the list of other Pokémon that were introduced with it isn't particularly relevant to the individual Pokémon. | |||
[[User:Stang|Stang]] ([[User talk:Stang|talk]]) 04:34, 30 January 2013 (UTC) | |||