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 ::Actually, you can set the gender ratio to 256 and it makes it appear as "Unknown". I have done so. --[[User:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#A70000">'''Snorlax'''</span>]][[User talk:SnorlaxMonster|<span style="color:#0000A7">'''Monster'''</span>]] 05:04, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
 :::Aha! Thank you, Snorlax! <sup>[[Typhlosion (Pokémon)|<span style="color:#C00;">★</span>]]</sup>[[User:Jo The Marten|<span style="color:#C00;">Jo the Marten</span>]]<sup>[[Flygon (Pokémon)|<span style="color:#C00;">★</span>]]</sup> [[User_Talk:Jo The Marten|<span style="color:#C00;">ಠ_ಠ</span>]][[Cilan (anime)|<span style="color:#90C870;">♥</span>]] 05:08, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
+== Choppiness of paragraph regarding its status as "first-introduced" of the generation ==
+Am I the only one who finds that beginning a sentence... no, an entire paragraph, with "It- alongside ... blah blah blah- was the first... " gives the paragraph an excessively choppy flow?
+Every time I encounter this sentence in the pages for all 3 Gen 6 Starters, I have to re-read it to understand what it's saying.
+I'm a native English speaker/reader, so I think there is a legitimate issue here.  I propose just saying "It was one of the first... ", because the list of other Pokémon that were introduced with it isn't particularly relevant to the individual Pokémon.
+[[User:Stang|Stang]] ([[User talk:Stang|talk]]) 04:33, 30 January 2013 (UTC)