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-'''Driftveil City''' (Japanese: '''ホドモエシティ''' ''Hodomoe City'') is a seaside city in western [[Unova]] that is used to ship containers from place to place. It has a big market place to the west of the city that sells some useful items. It usually rains in the area.
+'''Driftveil City''' (Japanese: '''ホドモエシティ''' ''Hodomoe City'') is a seaside city in western [[Unova]] that is used to ship containers from place to place. A large market offering some useful items occupies part of the city. It usually rains in the area.
-The city has two possible entrances on foot: from {{rt|6|Unova}}, and the [[Driftveil Drawbridge]] which leads to Unova's central peninsula.
+The city has two possible entrances on foot: from {{rt|6|Unova}} and from the [[Driftveil Drawbridge]], which leads to Unova's central peninsula.
 ==Places of interest==
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 ===Lighthouse===
-Driftveil City has a small beach and if the player {{m|Surf}}s directly off the beach, they can find the lighthouse which has a {{evostone|Water Stone}} on its shores.
+Driftveil City has a small beach. If the player {{m|Surf}}s directly off the beach, they can find the lighthouse, which has a {{evostone|Water Stone}} on its shore.
 ===Docks===