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:I do like your origin paragraph, but the paragraph on the page can't be nearly as long. A rule of thumb: If you can't keep the attention of a 13-year-old with ADHD (like me), then it's too long. --[[User:BeeBwakka|<span style="color:#52D017">Bee</span>]] [[Special:Random|<span style="color:#616D7E">§</span>]] [[User talk:BeeBwakka|<span style="color:#157DEC">Bwakka</span>]] 23:51, 31 January 2011 (UTC) | :I do like your origin paragraph, but the paragraph on the page can't be nearly as long. A rule of thumb: If you can't keep the attention of a 13-year-old with ADHD (like me), then it's too long. --[[User:BeeBwakka|<span style="color:#52D017">Bee</span>]] [[Special:Random|<span style="color:#616D7E">§</span>]] [[User talk:BeeBwakka|<span style="color:#157DEC">Bwakka</span>]] 23:51, 31 January 2011 (UTC) | ||
Fair enough, let me try and summarize what I have up there.[[User:Tro|Tro]] 17:15, 8 February 2011 (UTC) | |||
== Rhyperior's Japanese Name == | == Rhyperior's Japanese Name == | ||