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 Back on the floor, the still-upset Chikorita is sulking. Pikachu sees it and makes its way over, trying to cheer Chikorita up. But Chikorita's having none of it. Pikachu tries again, but Chikorita angrily waves its leaf, smacking a slipper on the floor up into the air, off the wall, and straight onto Togepi's head.
-Togepi bursts into tears, and the Pokémon start getting worried. Vulpix start making funny faces to try to get Togepi to stop crying, but without much success. Vulpix saves the day, however, by waving its tails in front of Togepi, which cheers Togepi up. Bulbasaur, Squirtle, and Pikachu sigh in relief.
+Togepi bursts into tears, and the Pokémon start getting worried. All of the other Pokemon (except Pikachu, Squirtle, Bulbasaur, Chikorita, and Vulpix) start making funny faces to try to get Togepi to stop crying, but without much success. Vulpix saves the day, however, by waving its tails in front of Togepi, which cheers Togepi up. Bulbasaur, Squirtle, and Pikachu sigh in relief.
 Pikachu turns on Chikorita, who, now more upset than ever, runs off. Surprised, Pikachu and the other Pokémon follow. Chikorita, looking back to see them chasing it, doesn't notice the large icicle hanging down in time to stop, and it rams into it. The other Pokémon see this and start laughing, which only angers Chikorita further.
-Pikachu playfully knocks on one of the icicles, which chimes. Squirtle knocks on a different one, which makes a different toned chime. Psyduck, Geodude, and Poliwag proceed to knock on icicles themselves, each making a different chime.
+Pikachu playfully knocks on one of the icicles, which chimes. Squirtle knocks on a different one with its head, which makes a different toned chime. Psyduck, Geodude, and Poliwag proceed to knock on icicles themselves, each making a different chime.
 This gives Pikachu an idea. Heading over to Heracross, it points out a row of the icicles, then does a Heracross-horn impression with his ears. Getting the idea, Heracross hits the icicles in a row, producing a downward scale of chimes. The Pokémon, enjoying the tune, start hitting icicles in order to make a makeshift tune.
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 Chikorita, watching this, realizes they're having fun, when suddenly Meowth's voice is heard. It says they're having fun, but they'll get hurt if they keeping slipping around like banana peels. Meowth makes its way down to show them how it's done, while Togepi's ride bumps it into Pikachu, knocking it down.
-Meowth makes its way onto the ice, but suddenly panics as it loses its traction, but manages to catch itself on its claws. However, it suddenly starts accelerating, and realizes Poliwag is sweeping the ice in front of Meowth like an Olympic Curler. Chikorita soon slides out to assist, and Meowth is sent into a speedy slide that results in it shooting off the ice and into a tree. This results in a pile of snow falling on it, much to the laughter of the other Pokémon.
+Meowth makes his way onto the ice, but suddenly panics as he loses his traction, but manages to catch himself on his claws. However, he suddenly starts accelerating, and realizes Poliwag is sweeping the ice in front of Meowth like an Olympic Curler. Chikorita soon slides out to assist, and Meowth is sent into a speedy slide that results in it shooting off the ice and into a tree. This results in a pile of snow falling on it, much to the laughter of the other Pokémon.
-Meowth fails to see the humor, but soon finds its chance for revenge when it sees Vulpix curling for Bulbasaur. Meowth makes its way out and starts sweeping too, and soon, Bulbasaur is sent on a similar ride as Meowth, with similar results. It too, crashes into a tree and gets buried in snow.
+Meowth fails to see the humor, but soon finds his chance for revenge when he sees Vulpix curling for Bulbasaur. Meowth makes his way out and starts sweeping too, and soon, Bulbasaur is sent on a similar ride as Meowth, with similar results. He too, crashes into a tree and gets buried in snow.
 Meowth gloats, but the angry Bulbasaur bursts out of the snow and wraps Meowth up with a {{m|Vine Whip}}. Bulbasaur then sends Meowth into a wild spin on the ice. Vulpix, Poliwag, and Chikorita start sweeping, making Meowth go even faster. Squirtle panics and withdraws, getting sent skidding by the spinning Meowth. Meowth ends up sending Pikachu and Togepi into spins, and gets pinged off Geodude like a Pinball hitting a bumper.
-Squirtle and Meowth are now heading right for each other, and they soon collide, sending Meowth flying. Meowth takes a moment to mention, "Even without Team Rocket, I'm blasting off anyway!" as it's launched away with the Team Rocket Ding.
+Squirtle and Meowth are now heading right for each other, and they soon collide, sending Meowth flying. Meowth takes a moment to mention, "Even without Team Rocket, I'm blasting off anyway!" as he launched away with the Team Rocket "Ding".
 The Pokémon are having another laugh at Meowth's expense while Squirtle pops out of its shell, wondering what happened. Chikorita suddenly pops in next to Pikachu again. They soon share another laugh.