Talk:PearlShipping: Difference between revisions

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:It says so right in the article history: August 2nd. [[User:ArcToraphim|Luna Tiger]] * [[User talk:ArcToraphim|the Arc Toraph]] 04:04, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
:It says so right in the article history: August 2nd. [[User:ArcToraphim|Luna Tiger]] * [[User talk:ArcToraphim|the Arc Toraph]] 04:04, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
::Didn't think to check the history. Thanks. --'''[[User:Midnight Blue|<span style="color:#003366">Midnight</span>]] [[User talk:Midnight Blue|<span style="color:#8C92AC">''Blue''</span>]]''' 04:08, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
::Didn't think to check the history. Thanks. --'''[[User:Midnight Blue|<span style="color:#003366">Midnight</span>]] [[User talk:Midnight Blue|<span style="color:#8C92AC">''Blue''</span>]]''' 04:08, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
Just a general FYI, I went through about half the page and addressed some grammar and general sentence structure issues. I changed nothing substantive even though, in many cases, it's clear that what is being presented as a "hint" is, in actually, almost painfully platonic. Funnily, the functional converse of this is also true, i.e., this page seems to actually omit some relevant Pearlshipping moments as well. Nevertheless, as stated, nothing substantive has been changed at this time. If I find the motivation, I may make a cleaner sweep in the near future to address more writing QC. [[User:Bluesmith|Bluesmith]] 12:21, 7 November 2010 (UTC)
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