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Okay, I honestly just saw "which was cut from the dub". Maybe it would be better if the sentence "Tracey's explanation was cut from the dub" at the end of the note. ''[[User:Kevin Y|<font color="darkred">Kevin Y</font>]]'' ([[User talk:Kevin Y|<font color="#083c6b">talk</font>]]) 21:20, 28 May 2009 (UTC) | Okay, I honestly just saw "which was cut from the dub". Maybe it would be better if the sentence "Tracey's explanation was cut from the dub" at the end of the note. ''[[User:Kevin Y|<font color="darkred">Kevin Y</font>]]'' ([[User talk:Kevin Y|<font color="#083c6b">talk</font>]]) 21:20, 28 May 2009 (UTC) | ||
:No, it wouldn't make sense there. I just reread the note, and that part only makes sense where it is. --[[User:Galladeon|Galladeon]] 21:21, 28 May 2009 (UTC) | :No, it wouldn't make sense there. I just reread the note, and that part only makes sense where it is. --[[User:Galladeon|Galladeon]] 21:21, 28 May 2009 (UTC) | ||
::The whole thing was confusing to me the first several times I read it, and I didn't even see the part about it being cut until the seventh time I read it. So I'm probably not the best person to change the wording around in that case, anyway. I'll leave it at is, and if anybody else has the same problem as me, then so be it. ''[[User:Kevin Y|<font color="darkred">Kevin Y</font>]]'' ([[User talk:Kevin Y|<font color="#083c6b">talk</font>]]) 21:23, 28 May 2009 (UTC) | |||