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	Your grammar needs some fixing up along with writing technigue. But nice try[[User:Darth Cookie Monster]] 00:18, 7 April 2008 (UTC)		Your grammar needs some fixing up along with writing technigue. But nice try[[User:Darth Cookie Monster]] 00:18, 7 April 2008 (UTC)

			wow i checked it on word doc