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::That's a fair enough point. I wasn't really sure how to phrase that bit, we can change it to "A grey ruff of fur or feathers, similar to that of a vulture, encircles its neck and billows out over its back." [[User:Togeknight|~Destruction on Wings~]] ([[User talk:Togeknight|talk]]) 16:32, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | ::That's a fair enough point. I wasn't really sure how to phrase that bit, we can change it to "A grey ruff of fur or feathers, similar to that of a vulture, encircles its neck and billows out over its back." [[User:Togeknight|~Destruction on Wings~]] ([[User talk:Togeknight|talk]]) 16:32, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::I'd remove the analogy with the vulture. "A grey ruff of fur or feathers encircles its neck..." is more then enough. I agree with all the rest, you did a pretty good job. --[[User:Tano|Tano]] ([[User talk:Tano|talk]]) 16:56, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | :::I'd remove the analogy with the vulture. "A grey ruff of fur or feathers encircles its neck..." is more then enough. I agree with all the rest, you did a pretty good job. --[[User:Tano|Tano]] ([[User talk:Tano|talk]]) 16:56, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::Thinking more carefully about it, they can't be feathers at all. It makes too many randomic curves, look at [http://i45.tinypic.com/jfhj6p.png this pic] I made (lol). They are hairs, totally. I was confused too from the video, but the artwork made it clearer. --[[User:Tano|Tano]] ([[User talk:Tano|talk]]) 17:06, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | |||