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:I don't agree with this part: "A ''feathery'' grey ruff, similar to that of a vulture, encircles its neck and billows out over its back". From how they're randomly floating in the artwork, they seems more like hairs, not feathers. They remind me of [http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/f/f9/244Entei.png Entei], not [http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/0/00/630Mandibuzz.png Mandibuzz] --[[User:Tano|Tano]] ([[User talk:Tano|talk]]) 15:20, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | :I don't agree with this part: "A ''feathery'' grey ruff, similar to that of a vulture, encircles its neck and billows out over its back". From how they're randomly floating in the artwork, they seems more like hairs, not feathers. They remind me of [http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/f/f9/244Entei.png Entei], not [http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/0/00/630Mandibuzz.png Mandibuzz] --[[User:Tano|Tano]] ([[User talk:Tano|talk]]) 15:20, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
::That's a fair enough point. I wasn't really sure how to phrase that bit, we can change it to "A grey ruff of fur or feathers, similar to that of a vulture, encircles its neck and billows out over its back." [[User:Togeknight|~Destruction on Wings~]] ([[User talk:Togeknight|talk]]) 16:32, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | ::That's a fair enough point. I wasn't really sure how to phrase that bit, we can change it to "A grey ruff of fur or feathers, similar to that of a vulture, encircles its neck and billows out over its back." [[User:Togeknight|~Destruction on Wings~]] ([[User talk:Togeknight|talk]]) 16:32, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::I'd remove the analogy with the vulture. "A grey ruff of fur or feathers encircles its neck..." is more then enough. I agree with all the rest, you did a pretty good job. --[[User:Tano|Tano]] ([[User talk:Tano|talk]]) 16:56, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | |||