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Well for one thing, "you" is used way too much. Get rid of it if you want to publish it. ''Alpha'' [[User:CuboneKing|<font color="Red">Cu</font>]][[User talk:CuboneKing|<font color="Bronze">bo</font>]][[Special:Contributions/CuboneKing|<font color="Green">ne</font>]][[Cubone (Pokémon)|<font color="Black">King</font>]] 01:11, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
Well for one thing, "you" is used way too much. Get rid of it if you want to publish it. ''Alpha'' [[User:CuboneKing|<font color="Red">Cu</font>]][[User talk:CuboneKing|<font color="Bronze">bo</font>]][[Special:Contributions/CuboneKing|<font color="Green">ne</font>]][[Cubone (Pokémon)|<font color="Black">King</font>]] 01:11, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
:You're on the right track, little bro, but you need more information & it's "Pokémon" not "Pokemon". Oh, and V.A.'s need to be written as a paragraph, not a chart. I can help you with that if you'd like. [[User:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#006400">'''Zesty'''</span>]][[User talk:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#3CB371">'''Cactus'''</span>]] 03:51, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
:You're on the right track, little bro, but you need more information & it's "Pokémon" not "Pokemon". Oh, and V.A.'s need to be written as a paragraph, not a chart. I can help you with that if you'd like. [[User:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#006400">'''Zesty'''</span>]][[User talk:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#3CB371">'''Cactus'''</span>]] 03:51, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
::Sure, you can do that when I publish it. A little too confusing for me. Just give me a couple of days to do the last edits. Besides that, what else does this page need? [[User:Thatguywiththecodes|<span style="color:#FF0000;">That Guy</span>]] [[Special:Contributions/Thatguywiththecodes|<span style="color:#001910;">With</span>]] [[User talk:Thatguywiththecodes|<span style="color:#OOCCOO;">The Codes</span>]] 00:44, 5 October 2009 (UTC)