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Hi!. I see that you erased my addition to Bronzong’s article. I’d like to justify it. I took it from [[http://books.google.it/books?id=TDr_TdYIWhQC&pg=PA19&lpg=PA19&dq=Eight+centuries+ago,+the+priests+of+Mugenyama,+in+the+province+of+Totomi&source=bl&ots=sLKDPxawmH&sig=faJMnhbEi7vQjRNMkl_kioqUDjk&hl=it&ei=RNL-S86SNc6m-AbnxcGkCg&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=2&ved=0CBoQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage&q=Eight%20centuries%20ago%2C%20the%20priests%20of%20Mugenyama%2C%20in%20the%20province%20of%20Totomi&f=false]]. From my point of view it is notable because it explains: why a mirror evolves into a bell, its ability (Heatproof), why Bronzong is a Psychic-type (the spirit of the woman), its Diamonf Pokédex entry (''One caused a news sensation when it was dug up at a construction site after a 2000-year sleep''). I’d like to know the reason behind your deletion. --[[User:Siegfried|Siegfried]] 20:20, 27 May 2010 (UTC) | Hi!. I see that you erased my addition to Bronzong’s article. I’d like to justify it. I took it from [[http://books.google.it/books?id=TDr_TdYIWhQC&pg=PA19&lpg=PA19&dq=Eight+centuries+ago,+the+priests+of+Mugenyama,+in+the+province+of+Totomi&source=bl&ots=sLKDPxawmH&sig=faJMnhbEi7vQjRNMkl_kioqUDjk&hl=it&ei=RNL-S86SNc6m-AbnxcGkCg&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=2&ved=0CBoQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage&q=Eight%20centuries%20ago%2C%20the%20priests%20of%20Mugenyama%2C%20in%20the%20province%20of%20Totomi&f=false]]. From my point of view it is notable because it explains: why a mirror evolves into a bell, its ability (Heatproof), why Bronzong is a Psychic-type (the spirit of the woman), its Diamonf Pokédex entry (''One caused a news sensation when it was dug up at a construction site after a 2000-year sleep''). I’d like to know the reason behind your deletion. --[[User:Siegfried|Siegfried]] 20:20, 27 May 2010 (UTC) | ||
:I erased it because I found your explanation of the legend was quite long, yet did not explain why it relates to Bronzong (your justification makes enough sense, but its not neccessarily obvious). I suppose its ok to include in the article if you make it clearer how it relates to Bronzong (and try not to make it too long plz D:). There isn't a wikipedia article on it (or something) that you could link to, is there? --[[User:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#006400">'''Zesty'''</span>]][[User talk:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#3CB371">'''Cactus'''</span>]] 20:55, 27 May 2010 (UTC) | :I erased it because I found your explanation of the legend was quite long, yet did not explain why it relates to Bronzong (your justification makes enough sense, but its not neccessarily obvious). I suppose its ok to include in the article if you make it clearer how it relates to Bronzong (and try not to make it too long plz D:). There isn't a wikipedia article on it (or something) that you could link to, is there? --[[User:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#006400">'''Zesty'''</span>]][[User talk:Zesty Cactus|<span style="color:#3CB371">'''Cactus'''</span>]] 20:55, 27 May 2010 (UTC) | ||
::Well, I tried to summarize to the bones the original text to emphasize only the notable informations. I actually avoided on purpose to make links to ''Heatproof'', ''Bronzor'' and so on because I didn't want to be too pedantic, but it seems I turned too esoteric instead... I actually don't know how to make it shorter without spoiling it (it's just a little more than 3 lines), but if you have any idea, feel free to edit it. The source is quite autoritative, being taken from [[wp:Kwaidan: Stories and Studies of Strange Things|Kwaidan: Stories and Studies of Strange Things]], a famous book by [[wp:Lafcadio Hearn|Lafcadio Hearn]]. As you can see in the article, I've taken it from the ''Of a Mirror and a Bell'' story. --[[User:Siegfried|Siegfried]] 21:17, 27 May 2010 (UTC) | |||