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there's no 'L; sound in there that I can hear. also, "I'll go" makes much more sense than "Although". "I'd give all of me" makes more sense there than "I will follow me"

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 It's time to realize the dream
 Of who we really are
-I'm gonna freeze this place in time
+I'm gonna freeze this space and time
 Rise to me the call
 Seize the moment make it mine
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 I will scale the heights if I believe
 The wings of faith will carry me
-Although the distance just to reach
+I'll go the distance just to reach
 The arms I'm running to
 I'll go the extra mile for you
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 I will scale the heights if I believe
 The wings of faith will carry me
-Although the distance just to reach
+I'll go the distance just to reach
 The arms I'm running to
 I'll go the extra mile for you
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 (I'll go the extra mile) In the end
 (I'll go the extra mile) I wanna be able to say
-I will follow me for the world to see
+I'd give all of me for the world to see
 And I will do it all again
 I'll go the extra mile
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 I will scale the heights if I believe
 The wings of faith will carry me
-Although the distance just to reach
+I'll go the distance just to reach
 The arms I'm running to
 I'll go the extra mile for you