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 ==Synopsis==
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-Ash, Dawn and Brock are taking a ship towards [[Twinleaf Town]], Dawn's hometown. As the long trip moves closer to its end little by little... a feeling of loneliness starts to creep in. Then a {{p|Pichu}} appears. Instinctively all three begin to smile as expected.
+Ash, Dawn, and Brock are aboard a ship heading back to [[Twinleaf Town]], gradually growing more lonely as the trip goes on due to the realization that the three will soon split up. However, a {{p|Pichu}} appears, brightening everyone's mood, followed by a {{p|Teddiursa}}, {{p|Igglybuff}}, {{p|Azurill}}, and {{p|Cleffa}}.
-Other cute Pokémon follow, {{p|Teddiursa}}, {{p|Igglybuff}}, {{p|Azurill}}, and {{p|Cleffa}} in sequence! Just then a harmonious mood fills the deck.
+However, all is not well. [[Team Rocket]] is stirring up trouble beneath the sea, disturbing some {{p|Tentacool}} and {{p|Tentacruel}} living peacefully at the bottom, and causing them to rush to the surface. Without warning, the Pokémon attack the ship, causing a great crisis.
-However... something devious was taking place underneath the ship in the bottom of the sea. Team Rocket disturbs the {{p|Tentacool}} and {{p|Tentacruel}} that were living peacefully. These angry jellyfish rush to the surface of the sea. All the Pokémon on board don't notice anything, and then a crisis comes...
 ==Major events==