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 :''"Is that you, <player>? Hello!"''
 :''"Did you come here to do some training as well?"''
-::'''Sure did!''' :''"I can tell you're passionate about training. Perhaps a veteran like myself could give you a piece of advice? When you give a command, pour as much emotion into it as you can. Pokémon respond much more into feelings than words alone."
+::'''Sure did!''' :''"I can tell you're passionate about training. Perhaps a veteran like me could give you a piece of advice?"''
-::'''Nope.''' :''"I see. Just out for a nice, relaxing stroll, then? We could all use a little rest here and there. It's hard to pour your emotions into your battle commands when you're feeling exhausted."
+::''"When you give your Pokémon a command, pour as much emotion into it as you can. Pokémon respond to feelings much more than words alone."
+::'''Nope.''' :''"I see. Just out for a nice, relaxing stroll, then?"''
+::''"We could all use a little rest here and there. It's hard to pour your emotions into your battle commands when you're feeling exhausted."
 :''"Well, I think it's about time I returned to my hotel."''
-:''"I hate to run off when we've only just begun to chat... but I have a pile of documents on my desk that is calling my name."''
+:''"I hate to run off when we've only just begun to chat...
-::'''You're staying at a hotel?''' :''"Yes."
+:''"but I have a pile of documents on my desk that is calling my name."''
-::'''What kind of documents?''' :''"Mostly academic."
+::'''You're staying at a hotel?''' :''"Yes. As you know, I'm a Pokémon Trainer, but I'm also an archeologist. It's a very busy job."''
-:''"As you know, I'm a Pokémon Trainer, but I'm also an archeologist. It's a very busy job."''
+::'''What sort of documents?''' :''"Mostly academic. As you know, I'm a Pokémon Trainer, but I'm also an archeologist. It's a very busy job."''
 :''"Sometimes it feels like my stack of research papers is never-ending... It just keeps growing and growing."''
 :''"And the moment I start organizing and cleaning up, I get distracted by something else."''
-::'''I know the feeling.''' :''"Frustrating, isn't it?! I mean, I can't throw them away if I might need them someday, right? I mean, I can't throw them away if I might need them someday, right?"
+::'''I know the feeling.''' :''"Frustrating, isn't it?!"''
-::'''You can do it!''' :''"You're right... I can! Cleaning is something you should put all your effort into, and make sure you get it all done at once. Otherwise, you'll end up doing the same thing, day after day."
+::''"I mean, I can't throw them away if I might need them someday, right?"''
+::''"And I use them all the time, so they need to be placed somewhere I can reach them easily, right?"''
+::'''You can do it!''' :''"You're right... I can!"''
+::''"Cleaning is something you should put all your effort into, and make sure you get it all done at once."''
+::''"Otherwise, you'll end up doing the same thing, day after day."
 :''"Naturally, I'm the one who has to clean my own home, eventually..."''
 :''"That's why staying in a hotel is so nice. The lovely staff there go in and clean my room while I'm gone."''
 :''"They tidy up all of my paperwork for me before my stacks get out of hand."''
 :''"Thanks to them, it's easier than ever to find the documents I'm looking for! They've helped me out so much."''
-:''"Likewise, when I was staying at my friend [[Caitlin]]'s villa... it didn't take long for my room there to become a mess of scattered research papers."''
+:''"Likewise, when I was staying at my friend {{mas|Caitlin}}'s villa...
-:''"But Caitlin's butler was kind enough to tidy it up for me each day."''
+:''"it didn't take long for my room there to become a mess of scattered research papers."''
-::'''You aren't very good at picking up after yourself, huh?''' :''"Mmm...no, maybe not."
+:''"But {{mas|Darach|Caitlin's butler}} was kind enough to tidy it up for me each day."''
+::'''You aren't very good at picking up after yourself, huh?''' :''"Mmm...no, maybe not."''
 ::'''You sound kind of messy.''' :''"Mmm...maybe so."
 :''"When it comes to Pokémon battling, I know exactly what I have to do."''
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 :''"You saw my Garchomp use Earthquake a moment ago, didn't you?"''
 :''"How did that move make you feel while you were watching? I'm curious."''
-::'''Pretty impressed!/I thought I could do better than that!''' :''"Well, I'll find out what sort of trainer you are when we get the chance to battle..."
+::'''Pretty impressed!'''/'''I thought I could do better than that!''' :''"Well, I'll find out what sort of Trainer you are when we get the chance to battle..."
-:''"I'm looking forward to competing in the PML. It'll be interesting to find out what battling means to each of the competitors."''
+:''"I'm looking forward to competing in the [[Pokémon Masters League|PML]]."''
-:''"You're included, of course! The two of us have to face off at some point—I insist."''
+:''"It'll be interesting to find out what battling means to each of the different competitors."''
+:''"You included, of course! The two of us have to face off at some point—I insist."''
 :''"I want you to let out all of your emotions. Show me who you truly are!"''
 :''"I won't let the battle end until I've had the chance to witness your true emotions!"''