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Hi Wowy, I have seen that you have heavily modified my synopsis of Pokemon Sun and Moon episode descriptions. It is really great that you're modifying and cleaning up articles but are you able to give me an example of an appropriately size episode article please? This is so I can use it as a guide in order to cut down on sentence size and write better in general next time I write a synopsis. Thanks[[User:Nikuriku|Nikuriku]] ([[User talk:Nikuriku|talk]]) 03:01, 31 August 2017 (UTC) | Hi Wowy, I have seen that you have heavily modified my synopsis of Pokemon Sun and Moon episode descriptions. It is really great that you're modifying and cleaning up articles but are you able to give me an example of an appropriately size episode article please? This is so I can use it as a guide in order to cut down on sentence size and write better in general next time I write a synopsis. Thanks[[User:Nikuriku|Nikuriku]] ([[User talk:Nikuriku|talk]]) 03:01, 31 August 2017 (UTC) | ||
:Hi! There's no hard or fast rule for plots, but in my opinion, they shouldn't be too long. You don't need every minor detail of the story (e.g. every comment that RotomDex makes in the episode isn't necessary). The length of [[XY079]] and [[XY081]] I think show good examples of those that are not too short and not too long. This is just my opinion and some episodes (e.g. Gym Battles), tend to require more detail in the battles and tend to be longer. | |||
:Also, keep sentences simple and not overly long-winded. Also, I think trying to diversify the sentence structure is handy as well to make a plot more interesting to read. In addition, breaking up long paragraphs into smaller paragraphs makes the text more readable. Hope this helps! --[[User:Wowy|<span style="color:green">'''Wowy'''</span>]][[User talk:Wowy|<sub style="color:#ED9121;">'''(토크)'''</sub>]] 05:23, 2 September 2017 (UTC) | |||