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 ==Plot==
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-At the Snowbound Lodge, {{adv|Platinum}} puts on her winter clothing. While looking out the window, she notices [[Maylene]] running through the snow with her Pokémon. After meeting with her and getting reacquainted, Platinum travels with Maylene who is going to go meet up with [[Candice]].
+As {{adv|Platinum}} stares at the poster in the {{DL|Sinnoh Route 216|Snowbound Lodge}}, she is shocked to learn that the girl who rescued her from passing out in the cold is [[Snowpoint City]]'s [[Gym Leader]], [[Candice]]. She is about to continue her route to [[Lake Acuity]], but decides to visit the city to thank Candice for her help. Platinum puts on her winter clothing, but before she can leave, she spots [[Maylene]] through a window. When Platinum runs outside to greet her, Maylene reveals that she is heading to Snowpoint City to train with Candice. Eager to see Candice, Platinum invites herself to join.
-After a bit of traveling the two arrive at the [[Snowpoint Gym]], and after solving the snowball puzzle Candice and Platinum meet and begin their battle. Platinum sends out her {{TP|Platinum|Empoleon}} while Candice sends out her {{p|Snover}}. Platinum suddenly gains the lead by knocking it out with one attack.
+As the two jog through the snow, Maylene is impressed that Platinum is able to keep up with her, especially since she has removed her winter coat. Maylene tells Platinum that she is visiting Candice to help her train against opponents whose attacks are {{DL|Type|Type effectiveness|super effective}} against {{type|Ice}} Pokémon, which Candice specializes in. Platinum is surprised that even a Gym Leader would still have much to learn. Maylene begins to mention that Candice has "special privileges," but she cuts herself off to announce that they've reached Snowpoint City.
+Maylene points out the direction to Lake Acuity, and Platinum immediately tries to rush to it. Maylene stops her, then tells her that she should check with Candice before going there. She explains that Candice has "special privileges" because as a Gym Leader, she has a duty to protect the [[Sinnoh]] region. Platinum thanks Maylene for walking with her, then departs for the [[Snowpoint Gym]] to speak with Candice. As Platinum leaves, Maylene wonders where {{adv|Diamond}} and {{adv|Pearl}} are.
+Platinum enters the Gym and attempts to speak with Candice, but she is assumed to be a challenger. Platinum supposes she will have to fight her way through the Gym in order to speak with Candice. After solving puzzles and battling {{pkmn|Trainer}}s, Platinum reaches Candice, who is delighted to see her. Platinum is finally able to thank Candice for rescuing her, and the latter is eager to begin their Gym battle. Platinum sends out {{TP|Platinum|Empoleon}} as Candice summons {{p|Snover}}. Using {{m|Metal Claw}}, Empoleon quickly knocks out Snover. Impressed, Candice announces that her next Pokémon will be the one that she usually saves for last.
+Watching through a nearby window, Maylene is surprised to see Platinum and Candice battling.
 ==Major events==