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:I'm not against condensing the information that was there. However, I do not think we need to re-add and condense everything. We are a Pokemon site, not a mythology site. The entire story behind a Pokemon's origin is not necessary to understand it. People wanting to now more or better understand Zygarde's origins are welcome to use the wikipedia links. You may add some of it back, but only that which is 100% necessary. Nothing should stray from the connection to Zygarde specifically. That said, please be aware that if it becomes to lengthy after your edit, I may still remove some of it. [[User:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#9F00C5">Crystal</span>]] [[User talk:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Talian</span>]] 00:01, 17 April 2016 (UTC) | :I'm not against condensing the information that was there. However, I do not think we need to re-add and condense everything. We are a Pokemon site, not a mythology site. The entire story behind a Pokemon's origin is not necessary to understand it. People wanting to now more or better understand Zygarde's origins are welcome to use the wikipedia links. You may add some of it back, but only that which is 100% necessary. Nothing should stray from the connection to Zygarde specifically. That said, please be aware that if it becomes to lengthy after your edit, I may still remove some of it. [[User:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#9F00C5">Crystal</span>]] [[User talk:Crystal Talian|<span style="color:#FF00FF">Talian</span>]] 00:01, 17 April 2016 (UTC) | ||
::I have a first edit of the draft on my userpage. It has now been reduced to four paragraphs and 426 words (it was previously 738). For the sake of comparison, the current origin page is 403 words and six paragraphs. [[User:Pacack| <span style="background:#000000"><span style="color:#ffe700">'''Pa'''ᗧ•••</span><span style="color:#0000FF">ᗣ'''ck'''</span> </span>]] 23:03, 17 April 2016 (UTC) | ::I have a first edit of the draft on my userpage. It has now been reduced to four paragraphs and 426 words (it was previously 738). For the sake of comparison, the current origin page is 403 words and six paragraphs. [[User:Pacack| <span style="background:#000000"><span style="color:#ffe700">'''Pa'''ᗧ•••</span><span style="color:#0000FF">ᗣ'''ck'''</span> </span>]] 23:03, 17 April 2016 (UTC) | ||
:::I'd like to join this game ( =P ). [[User:Tiddlywinks/Zygarde origin]]. | |||
:::I've mostly put an introductory paragraph at the beginning to frontload the connection of Fenrir/Jormungandr/Hel being Loki's children; there's just no good way to spread that across the individual paragraphs for the three Formes without making the connection more difficult to pick out than it probably should be. After that, I also rearranged the paragraphs to go in "increasing" order, instead of in no consistent order. (I realize it might be logical to say that 50% is the "default" Forme, but I still think strictly increasing/decreasing is best. I also note that the Biology section actually has an order of 50%/Complete/10%...) | |||
:::Pacack, I took some cues and left some out from the version on your page. The one thing I'd most like to comment on is, I don't know where you get that Helreginn was "gargantuan". (I just can't really find much, and nothing (halfway reliable) that says that.) [[User:Tiddlywinks|Tiddlywinks]] ([[User talk:Tiddlywinks|talk]]) 23:57, 17 April 2016 (UTC) | |||
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