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I'm looking forward this page, as it seems very interesting, but I've got some suggestions.
I'm looking forward this page, as it seems very interesting, but I've got some suggestions.
- The "spider" section is missing Joltik and Galvantula.
:- The "spider" section is missing Joltik and Galvantula.
- The "deer" section is missing Deerling and Sawsbuck.
:- The "deer" section is missing Deerling and Sawsbuck.
- The "bear" section is missing Cubchoo and Beartic.
:- The "bear" section is missing Cubchoo and Beartic.
- The "mole" section is missing Drillbur and Excadrill.
:- The "mole" section is missing Drillbur and Excadrill.
- The "canine" section is missing Lillipup, Herdier and Stoutland.
:- The "canine" section is missing Lillipup, Herdier and Stoutland.
- The "snake" section is missing Snivy, Servine and Serperior.
:- The "snake" section is missing Snivy, Servine and Serperior.
- The "pig" section is missing Tepig, Pignite and Emboar.
:- The "pig" section is missing Tepig, Pignite and Emboar.
- The "primate" section is missing the elemental monkeys.
:- The "primate" section is missing the elemental monkeys.
- The "rodent" section is missing Patrat, Watchog, Minccino and Cinccino.
:- The "rodent" section is missing Patrat, Watchog, Minccino and Cinccino.
- The "dinosaur" section is missing Cranidos, Rampardos, Shieldon, Bastiodon, Archen and Archeops.
:- The "dinosaur" section is missing Cranidos, Rampardos, Shieldon, Bastiodon, Archen and Archeops.
- The "turtle" section is missing Tirtouga and Carracosta.
:- The "turtle" section is missing Tirtouga and Carracosta.
- The "hedgehog" section is missing Quilladin and Chesnaught.
:- The "hedgehog" section is missing Quilladin and Chesnaught.
- The "mushroom" section is missing Foongus and Amoonguss.
:- The "mushroom" section is missing Foongus and Amoonguss.
- The "cactus" section is missing Maractus.
:- The "cactus" section is missing Maractus.
- The "bird" section is missing Hawlucha.
:- The "bird" section is missing Hawlucha.
- Maybe a "pterosaur" section for Aerodactyl?
:- Maybe a "pterosaur" section for Aerodactyl?
- Maybe a "rooster" section for Blaziken?
:- Maybe a "rooster" section for Blaziken?
- Maybe a "vulture" section for Vullaby and Mandibuzz?
:- Maybe a "vulture" section for Vullaby and Mandibuzz?
- Maybe a "eagle" section for Rufflet and Braviary?
:- Maybe a "eagle" section for Rufflet and Braviary?
- Maybe a "swan" section for Ducklett and Swanna?
:- Maybe a "swan" section for Ducklett and Swanna?
- Maybe a "zebra" section for Blitzle and Zebstrika?
:- Maybe a "zebra" section for Blitzle and Zebstrika?
- Maybe a "pigeon" section for Pidove and Tranquill?
:- Maybe a "pigeon" section for Pidove and Tranquill?
- Maybe a "gamefowl" section for Unfezant?
:- Maybe a "gamefowl" section for Unfezant?
- Maybe a "buffalo" section for Bouffalant?
:- Maybe a "buffalo" section for Bouffalant?
- Maybe a "anteater" section for Heatmor?
:- Maybe a "anteater" section for Heatmor?
- Maybe a "ant" section for Durant?
:- Maybe a "ant" section for Durant?
- Maybe a "centipede" section for Venipede, Whirlipede and Scolipede?
:- Maybe a "centipede" section for Venipede, Whirlipede and Scolipede?
- Some of the Pokemon on the various "general" section, in my opinion, are too clearly based on a specific animal to be there. Taillow and Swellow are too much based on swallows, Goldeen and Seaking too much based on goldfishes, etc. This is especially blatant since you didn't think it twice about putting the Nidorans on the "rabbit" section (when they look nothing at all like rabbits).
:- Some of the Pokemon on the various "general" section, in my opinion, are too clearly based on a specific animal to be there. Taillow and Swellow are too much based on swallows, Goldeen and Seaking too much based on goldfishes, etc. This is especially blatant since you didn't think it twice about putting the Nidorans on the "rabbit" section (when they look nothing at all like rabbits).
- The "feline" section has its format quite messed up, and it's missing Purrloin and Liepard.
:- The "feline" section has its format quite messed up, and it's missing Purrloin and Liepard.
- Some lines (particularly the Drowzee, Zorua and Frillish lines) are based on animals (tapir, fox and jellyfish respectively) but also on Japanese folklore, so I don't know if they fit here.
:- Some lines (particularly the Drowzee, Zorua and Frillish lines) are based on animals (tapir, fox and jellyfish respectively) but also on Japanese folklore, so I don't know if they fit here.
There are probably more, but that's all I can think at the moment.
There are probably more, but that's all I can think at the moment.
I would do it myself, but I think it would be rude to edit someone else's page without permission, so I bring it here for discussion.
I would do it myself, but I think it would be rude to edit someone else's page without permission, so I bring it here for discussion.