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Could you tell me what i did wrong? im sorta new around here. --[[User:Rsrdaman|Rsrdaman]] 01:46, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Could you tell me what i did wrong? im sorta new around here. --[[User:Rsrdaman|Rsrdaman]] 01:46, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
:Hi, there are couple of things that need to be addressed about your edits. First of all, that article was very badly written, it had tons of grammar and spelling mistakes, that you should have proof read beforehand. Secondly, there's a welcome template on your talk page giving out useful tips and information about how to edit properly here, and most importantly, the {{bp|Manual of Style}}. You were also using "you" to address the reader, which we don't do here as it is not encyclopedic. Finally, I believe your topic is of questionable notability, I think by now we have covered all the notable glitches from RB generation, so there was no need for that article at all. I will bring up the topic of this glitch with {{u|SnorlaxMonster}}, since he's more knowledgeable about glitches, and discuss it with him, however. All in all, please take some time to get used to the style of editing here before going out and creating articles which may get deleted if they are not done properly.  <span style="color:red">—<small>♥</small></span> <b>[[User:Jello|<span style="color:orange;">Jello</span>]][[User Talk:Jello|<span style="color:#3FA9D0;"><sup>talk</sup></span>]]</b> 02:01, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
:Hi, there are couple of things that need to be addressed about your edits. First of all, that article was very badly written, it had tons of grammar and spelling mistakes, that you should have proof read beforehand. Secondly, there's a welcome template on your talk page giving out useful tips and information about how to edit properly here, and most importantly, the {{bp|Manual of Style}}. You were also using "you" to address the reader, which we don't do here as it is not encyclopedic. Finally, I believe your topic is of questionable notability, I think by now we have covered all the notable glitches from RB generation, so there was no need for that article at all. I will bring up the topic of this glitch with {{u|SnorlaxMonster}}, since he's more knowledgeable about glitches, and discuss it with him, however. All in all, please take some time to get used to the style of editing here before going out and creating articles which may get deleted if they are not done properly.  <span style="color:red">—<small>♥</small></span> <b>[[User:Jello|<span style="color:orange;">Jello</span>]][[User Talk:Jello|<span style="color:#3FA9D0;"><sup>talk</sup></span>]]</b> 02:01, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
::Thanks for telling me all that! I will make sure to revise the whole thing according to what you said. And if it does get approved by {{u|SnorlaxMonster}} I would glady re write it. And if you want to see the glitch in action goto [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JgVUZPTt21E&feature=player_embedded Cable Club black out glitch]. Thanks again! And sorry for my mistakes! --[[User:Rsrdaman|Rsrdaman]] 02:47, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
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