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 ::::I also just noticed [http://superjumppunch.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/SnorlaxMonster this], [http://superjumppunch.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/Jo_The_Marten this], and even [http://superjumppunch.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/The_dark_lord_trombonator this]. I didn't even know they could copy contributions like that. --[[User:Abcboy|Abcboy]] ([[User talk:Abcboy|talk]]) 03:29, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
 :::::Wow, what the hell? How did they do that? I never made those edits. <sup>[[Typhlosion (Pokémon)|<span style="color:#C00;">★</span>]]</sup>[[User:Jo The Marten|<span style="color:#C00;">Jo the Marten</span>]]<sup>[[Flygon (Pokémon)|<span style="color:#C00;">★</span>]]</sup> [[User_Talk:Jo The Marten|<span style="color:#C00;">ಠ_ಠ</span>]][[Cilan (anime)|<span style="color:#90C870;">♥</span>]] 03:39, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
+== About the changes you made to the Join Avenue article ==
+I don't want to revert everything you did, but neither do I feel like putting in the enormous amount of work it would take to correct your mistakes. So I'm asking, could you please do that yourself? I think you'd figure out where you went wrong if you read the article, but I can provide some main points:
+* You've removed all the question marks from the recommendation phrase table, which were there because they had not been disconfirmed. For example, the table now says that "Is there a place where I can warm up?" is not compatible with the Raffle Shop type, when it is. Essentially, you turned a "research in progress" table into a final one, which does not make sense unless you've somehow acquired complete knowledge on it, but the example above illustrates that you have not.
+* You've also included the phrases "I want to get excited about something" and "I want to buy some delicious berries!", which I hid because the users who originally added them to the article most likely did not write them exactly as they appear in the games - first one lacks a period or an exclamation mark, second one probably capitalizes Berries like the other Berry-related phrase.
+* You changed the recommendation phrase table's point system from two columns which presented NPC fans' 75% and multiplayer representations' 100%, listing the correct point values for the various quotes, to a four column system that erroneously factors in Hall of Fame entrance, has the same point values for almost every phrase, and for some reason mentions StreetPass, which you will also discover makes little sense if you read the article.
+* You've expanded the Café table to include not only one price per service, but one for each rank as well, which you'll see is completely wrong if you read what the article says about avenue rank.
+There's more, but I may be able to take care of that myself, after you've cleaned up. [[User:Yvnr|Yvnr]] ([[User talk:Yvnr|talk]]) 08:11, 16 January 2013 (UTC)