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 :I think I have a sugggestion to improve the sentence.  "It was one of the first Generation VI Pokémon to be revealed, along with as Xerneas, Yveltal, and the <nowiki>[[Chespin|other]]</nowiki> <nowiki>[[Fennekin|two]]</nowiki> starters, to the public on January 8, 2013, as part of a special <nowiki>[[Nintendo Direct|Pokémon Direct]]</nowiki> broadcast."  --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 06:27, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
-== Choppiness of paragraph regarding its status as "first-introduced" of the generation ==
-Am I the only one who finds that beginning a sentence... no, an entire paragraph, with "It- alongside ... blah blah blah- was the first... " gives the paragraph an excessively choppy flow?
-Every time I encounter this sentence in the pages for all 3 Gen 6 Starters, I have to re-read it to understand what it's saying.
-I'm a native English speaker/reader, so I think there is a legitimate issue here.  I propose just saying "It was one of the first... ", because the list of other Pokémon that were introduced with it isn't particularly relevant to the individual Pokémon.
-[[User:Stang|Stang]] ([[User talk:Stang|talk]]) 04:34, 30 January 2013 (UTC)