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 '''North Petalburg''' (Japanese: '''キタトウカシティ''' ''North Touka City'') is a city located just north of [[Petalburg City]] in [[Hoenn]]. It appeared in the {{pkmn|anime}} in ''[[AG068|A Double Dilemma]]''.
-The city doesn't appear to be any different than any other at first glance. However, the entire city is obsessed with the Petalburg [[Gym Leader]] [[Norman]]. In fact, when {{Ash}} and {{ashfr}} were passing through on their way to Petalburg, he was pushed aside for some strange reason when the residents found out he was traveling with Norman's {{an|May|daughter}} and [[Max|son]].
+At first glance, the city appears no different from any other town. However, the entire city is obsessed with the Petalburg [[Gym Leader]] [[Norman]]. In fact, when {{Ash}} and {{ashfr}} were passing through on their way to Petalburg, he was pushed aside when the residents found out that he was traveling with Norman's {{an|May|daughter}} and [[Max|son]].
-They were so obsessed with Norman, that when Ash began defeating May in a {{pkmn|battle}}, all of the town started to boo him unfairly, even though he was winning legitimately.
+The citizens were so obsessed with Norman, that when Ash began defeating May in a {{pkmn|battle}}, all of the spectators started to unfairly jeer at him, even though he was winning legitimately.
 ==Pokémon seen in North Petalburg==